My fingers break the intangible air,
I imagine
victory,
or some sweet defeat,
breaking point,
the blood of the sky
pouring down my
assailant hands
sweet liquid
invisible
but I feel
it.
I imagine your
loving but cold
hands
rubbing
all the sore spots
on my broken back
from too many nights
up screaming at life
trying to manipulate it
like i did all those poor
sad broken
left-behind
people I used to
feel so close to but now
we all float apart
drifting satellites
each shaking away
violently,
with lovers on our backs,
and fake lovers grasping
at flailing legs
growing more distant.
A humble comet,
burning up slowly,
no longer alone.
Great imagery. I like the use of the comet.
thanks, I’m happy you enjoyed it. I’ve read some of your writing, it’s got a fairly high quality level to it (which is uncommon in most blogs). Keep up the good work, your piece on slut’o’ween was bang-on!
Wow…Andy this one is very powerful…just live the imagery.
thank you kindly.